I am Charles
And here is my story
It started as the inspector came and Benny and I were called up. We sang horribly and we were nervous
Today, our Singing inspector came.His name is Mr. Raymond, and he is really strict.He called me and Benny up to the stage and we didn't know what to sing, well we didn't know anything to sing. Then I said that we should sing happy birthday.We sang horribly! It was so bad we started to freak out. Then he said get these singless idiots out of here. When we walked out I started crying, then when I stopped crying I said this has been the worst thing ever to happen to me.I said that he was a bullie and we should get him fired. We wanted to do that ever since the horrible tragic day!
Some times we would look for him when he’d come back to the school but he never came.Mr.Raymond has been absent ever since the day. I personally think he’s just to scared to show up. One day we just gave up and that’s the end of my story, super tragic.
Some times we would look for him when he’d come back to the school but he never came.Mr.Raymond has been absent ever since the day. I personally think he’s just to scared to show up. One day we just gave up and that’s the end of my story, super tragic.
Lexi, there are a few things you haven't included in your post (which is quite short). Did you check all the instructions you were given? I also think your first 2 sentences need to come a bit later in your story. You can go back and edit your post.
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